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Dear Death

I am writing out of curiosity
And if only out of generosity
I hope you'll humour me
And help me to see

Will you take our hand
And take us from this land?
Or do we stay where we fell?
No matter what we tell

Do you have any mercy?
Or a sick kind of irony?
Do you cry high above the canopy?
Or are you just uncaring entropy?

Why are you so relentless?
Leaving us with less and less
And for all the days we wait
Is it just another day to late?

I guess I won't know
Until, at last you show
I hope I'll be happy to greet
So, until we meet

Forever yours

humanity
hmm I don't think this is the best but I wanted to submit so here it is.
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cRaZy-dOOdler Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very pensive piece. I think you summarized our thoughts and feelings about death incredibly well :) 
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draws-with-words Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou! ^_^
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KayleeRydder Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow. I love this! its on the verge of being sad, more thoughtful.

Well written.
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draws-with-words Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I didn't want it to be completely sad so that's good. :)
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HeadFullOfMusic Aug 2, 2011  Student General Artist
It's really gd u should appreciate your poems more ;D
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draws-with-words Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awww, thankyou :D
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lunar-sky Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
sounds nice :D
i must read more of your poems
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draws-with-words Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
tehe thanx :D

I don't think this ones the best but it seems to be the one with the most amount of favourites, so maybe I'm just really out of kilter with what everyone else likes lol
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Nicely written, and Death keeps us from destroying ourselves, since it makes us live our lives, instead of wasting them.
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draws-with-words Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx :D

and yes, Death is the best motivator
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